Friday, June 12, 2020
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Hi Aaleiyah.
ReplyDeleteI totally guessed who came home in your story. I didn't even need the 3 seconds! I loved that you added questions, adjectives and LOADS of awesome details to your writing. It allowed me to have a really clear picture in my mind as I was reading it.
Great work,
Mrs McIntyre
Thank you Mrs McIntyre it took my a long time to rewrite it but i did like it thank you for your positive comments
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