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Thursday, August 20, 2020

instruction

hope you like it

2 comments:

  1. Hi Aaleiyah,
    Great job writing instructions on how to make a jam sandwich. I wonder if you would change anything now that you have learnt more about writing instructions e.g. adding a title, what you need, handy hints etc. I am looking forward to seeing your next piece of writing.
    Mrs M

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  2. kia ora Aaleiyah i rely like your Sandwiche writing. but i think you can put your name next to all your writing.

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