I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 20, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Aaleiyah,
ReplyDeleteGreat job writing instructions on how to make a jam sandwich. I wonder if you would change anything now that you have learnt more about writing instructions e.g. adding a title, what you need, handy hints etc. I am looking forward to seeing your next piece of writing.
Mrs M
kia ora Aaleiyah i rely like your Sandwiche writing. but i think you can put your name next to all your writing.
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